Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Trick or Treat: The Bravery of Zach and Nick





While trick-or-treating, my friends and I decided to explore a dark street we had never noticed before. There was only one street lamp on the whole street, and it wasn’t even working properly. The light flickered on and off giving the street a sort of creepy feel. I glanced at my friends, and in the moment we all agreed that we were big boys and started down the street to the only house with its lights on. Being the oldest of the group (by only four months) I felt it was my job to lead the way for the other four in my group. When I looked at the others, it seemed they had agreed too. We passed a few houses, some had decorations, and some didn’t. Slowly, we approached the house. Said house looked older than the others, with its worn roof and overgrown yard. The driveway had a creepy looking pumpkin near the garage. It had a cheerful smile, but its eyes looked evil, like it was trying to draw us in with false kindness. As I looked at the Jack-o-Lantern, it seemed to be looking back at me. Then…“Hey Zach! There’s a bag of candy on the porch!” The voice of little Jimmy broke the staring contest between myself and the pumpkin. Obviously I was winning… Shaking my head, I made my way over to the others, never once noticing that the pumpkin was, in fact following me as I walked. “Anything good?” I asked when I got back to the group. Ben nodded, his cheeks stuffed with what appeared to be chocolate, if the brown stuff around his mouths was a tell-tell sign. Eagerly, I practically skipped over to the back of candy to find some good stuff. As I reached into the bag of candy, I thought I heard a voice saying, “Pick me, pick me!” That was completely ridiculous thought, because everyone knew candy can’t talk. “Pick meeeeee!” There it was again. Quickly, I turned and looked at my friends. “Did you guys say something?” I asked, narrowing my eyes at them. Little Jimmy shook his head while Nick, the second oldest, spoke up. “Nope, I think the candy has gone to your head, Zach.” I guess he could be right, but I swear I was hearing someone. Sighing, I got a handful of candy and put it in my pillowcase before moving away from the porch. That’s when it all happened.
Creeeeeak.
“Helllooooo? Hellooooooooooooooo?” A creepy voice called out to us from the slowly opening door. Little Jimmy jumped and hide behind my back. Everyone else followed his lead, making me be the buffer between them and the unknown person. As the door opened the jack-o-lantern from earlier waddled up onto the porch and grinned at us. “hellooo? Children? Come to meeeee.” The voice whispered, the wind picking up and blowing towards the house. Beckoning us to go closer and poor Ben, who had eaten almost all he candy already, started walking to the porch as if in a trance. “Ben!” Jack called, trying to grab the other boy’s sleeve, but yet he walked past up.  I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. Ben was walking like a zombie to the house and there was a pumpkin waving at us, me, its smile widening with every step Ben took. “Zach! Help him!” Little Jimmy cried, snapping me out of my shock. Quick as a bee, I grabbed Ben’s arm and dragged him back to the group and handed him to Nick. “Oh? Children… Dooo you not waaannnnt a treeeeeeeeeeat.” The voice called again, a older looking lady appeared halfway from the doorway. She seemed to be floating off the floor a few inches. Her short brown hair floated around her head and white eyes stared at us. I couldn’t help but shiver. “Hey! You old hag! We don’t want your candy no more!” I yelled, slowly having my group back up. The women laughed, it was a harsh and eerily sound that made us all freeze in place. “Oh… But little kiddies looooove treaaaats.” I scowled a little, turning away from the hag and faced my friends. “Come on, lets get out of here. Jimmy’s mom will want him home.” The others nodded and Nick led the way, his hand still holding onto Ben’s arm tightly so the younger boy wouldn’t get away. After making sure my friends were almost to the end of the yard, I turned back around and with my impressive nine year old bravery, I faced the witch. “Zach! What are you doing?!” I heard Nick yell at me. “Get over here!” For a nine year old he was rather bossy, I couldn’t help but think. “You leave my friends alone!” I shouted then pivoted on the heels of my feet and darted back to the group. Taking little Jimmy’s hand, Nick and I ran quickly down the street with the younger boys. I never wanted to go back to that house again.
Meanwhile, back at the house a young girl of about sixteen stepped out from the door way, pushing the button on a remote making the image of the witch vanish. Laughing, the girl called out to someone else in the house. “Dakota! We got them good this year!” There was a harsh sounding laugh followed by the light pitter patter of footsteps before an older girl with long brown hair stood next to the younger, a creepy smile on her face. “Oh yes… And boy was it fun. Though, I had hoped to catch one of those delicious looking boys. Mama will be rather angry we didn’t get a larger meal.” The older girl said softly, her eyes glinting as she took in the three little boys tied up in the living room. “These will have to do.”




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